The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summaries the information and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The first picture illustrates the map of the village of Stokeford in 1930, and
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the second picture shows Linking Words
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the transformation
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after the development in 2010, the large house and the garden had been demolished, and replaced by a new retirement house. Linking Words
Also
, the primary school has been expanded to double the original size by the government to provide a better education place for the students. Linking Words
Moreover
, two new shops have been built on the west side of the primary school.One interesting about the transformation is that the bridge on the north side still Linking Words
remain
the same to maintain the crossway between the two sides of the village.
Another striking change was the farmland had been replaced by a great number of new houses along the road Change the verb form
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due to
the expansion of the residences in the village throughout the years.Linking Words
In addition
, the post office is still being preserved for the purpose of mailing.Linking Words
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