The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the way the Stromer town has expanded since 1995.

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, what stands out from the plan is that farmland and

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forest

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forests

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are cut down

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urbanizing and modernizing the city. As can be seen, in 1995 there

were

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a large farmland, to the north of which

houses

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are surrounded

with

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by

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a vast

forest

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.

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evident is there are shops in the

center

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of town near the

houses

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. At present, the farmland has been reduced and turned into

apartmants

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apartments

,

houses

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, and shops.

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, a school is built in the city

center

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and

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forest

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the forest

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transformed

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is transformed

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into shops on either side of the school. Another important fact is the

northen

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northern

forest

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made

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was made

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into an airport, to the west of which is a small

farest

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farthest

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back onto apartments.

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Also

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the

houses

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in the

north west

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northwest

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has

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been removed and apartments were constructed

instead

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.

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, a narrow part of the

forest

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has

remaind

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remained

in the west of the city from south to the north.