The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the way the Stromer town has expanded since 1995.
Overall
, what stands out from the plan is that farmland and forest
are cut down Fix the agreement mistake
forests
due to
urbanizing and modernizing the city.
As can be seen, in 1995 there were
a large farmland, to the north of which Change the verb form
was
houses
are surrounded with
a vast Change preposition
by
forest
. Also
evident is there are shops in the center
of town near the Change the spelling
centre
houses
.
At present, the farmland has been reduced and turned into apartmants
, Correct your spelling
apartments
houses
, and shops. Additionally
, a school is built in the city center
and Change the spelling
centre
forest
Correct article usage
the forest
transformed
into shops on either side of the school. Another important fact is the Add a missing verb
is transformed
northen
Correct your spelling
northern
forest
made
into an airport, to the west of which is a small Add a missing verb
was made
farest
back onto apartments. Change the word
farthest
furthest
Also
the Add a comma
Also,
houses
in the north west
Correct your spelling
northwest
has
been removed and apartments were constructed Change the verb form
have
instead
. However
, a narrow part of the forest
has remaind
in the west of the city from south to the north.Correct your spelling
remained
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