Humans are producing an increasing amount of trash everyday and the world is becoming full of the landfills we use to get rid of our trash. In your opinion , How can recycling save the environment and help the people on Earth ?

These days people are manufacturing a rising amount of trash
everytime
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and the planet is changing into full of the landfills we
use
to get rid of our trash .
And now
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I will show the ways of recycling
of
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trashs
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trash
trashes
and will give my own opinions about
this
topic .
Firstly
, recycling means
to
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using it
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use
again and again . Recycling helps
to
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the world because of
this
. We are reusing
things
instead
of using other new
things
, like metals ,
paper
, tins ,
plastic
,
glass
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and glass
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. We can reproduce these
things
.
For example
,
paper
is made of wood , it can
also
be recycled from another
paper
. First , old papers are sent to the factories and
then
they are shredded and mashed into
pulb
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pulp
. And
then
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the
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the pulb
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pulb
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pull
bulb
is turned back into
paper
. Reproducing
of
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paper
is really
benefit
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beneficial
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for us because
this
saves trees from cutting down of
another trees
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another tree
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.
Secondly
, tins and metals , practically , tin
is
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are
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made from
aluminum
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aluminium
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. Many countries of the world
use
to produce some parts of new cars from
aluminum
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aluminium
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and a lot of parts from
metall
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metal
. And
finally
,
plastic
is a material , many items are made of
plastic
,
for example
,
bottles
, cups , cell phones and many other items are made from
plastic
. By the
way
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these days water is being packaged in
bottles
whoever drinks it some of them are throwing them everywhere and that really damages the environment . I think we should not do that because many
plastic
things
is
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reproducing
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produced
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from
bottles
and like
this
, after that if we recycle them , a less
bottles
and
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like
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it
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will
produce
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on Earth .
To conclude
I believe that , there are many more
things
which can be recycled. Reprocessing is good for us because we reuse products and
we
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do not waste energy which we can
use
in the future. Recycling is good and you should recycle
much
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as much
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as you can.
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