You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own.Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club.In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities,members,costs
Dear Sir
I am writing to ask for information about
sports
Correct article usage
the sports
club
. I am student
from college.I am going to experience Add an article
a student
for
athletic activities. Change preposition
apply
Sports
club
facilities
does
not provide for athletics.Change the verb form
do
However
, I would to request more information from here.
Firstly
,I am going to say
about Verb problem
talk
facilities
that comfortable
for students.All of Add a missing verb
are comfortable
them
students Correct your spelling
the
over
the moon about it.It would be interesting for training.Add a missing verb
are over
Its
beneficial for Replace the word
It's
It is
well-being
of humans.Add an article
the well-being
Also
Add a comma
Also,
facilities
would greatly increase my experience.
Secondy
,I would be interested to know how gym equipment Correct your spelling
Secondly
Second
cheapest
rather than other Add a missing verb
is cheapest
sports
club
.Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
Then
I compared costs
to other Correct article usage
the costs
sports
clubs.Its
is easiest to purchase for people Correct pronoun usage
It
that
watch the game from Correct pronoun usage
who
top
of Add an article
a top
the top
the
seats.
Change the word
their
Then
I wonder to know membership
of Add an article
the membership
sport
clubs.Change the noun form
sports
For example
each member of sport
Correct article usage
the sport
club
's costs benefits.Such
as tickets for game
or different events.Do you have Fix the agreement mistake
games
idea
about Correct quantifier usage
any idea
sport
Change the noun form
sports
facilities
?Ask me any of them.
I would appreciate it if you could inform me as soon as possible. If possible, It would be of great help if you could fax me the details.
I look forward to hearing from you!
Yours faithfully,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your letter follows a clear logical structure with an appropriate opening and concluding sentence.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on one main idea; avoid mixing different topics within a single paragraph.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task, including introducing yourself properly, explaining your interest in the sports club, and asking specific questions about the facilities, membership, and costs.
task achievement
Use a more appropriate and consistent tone suitable for a formal letter. Avoid colloquial language and ensure the politeness level is consistent throughout the letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.