Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment?

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Over the
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few years, the number of people who prefer
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has increased significantly.
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there are several advantages of orthodox justice, it can have some disadvantages as well. I will try to discuss both
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and negative sides of
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and draw a conclusion. On the one hand, there are several benefits of fixed disciplines. The first merit of it is considered to be that it prevents
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from slipping
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through loopholes in the law.
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, a person
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in
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by my uncle and a person
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in
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. For my uncle,
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was not
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judge's opinion
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time. Another positive aspect is thought to be that it prevents any corruption within the legal system affecting the
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given.
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will be objective and not depend on the judge's opinion.
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because
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run away
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detail.
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, despite
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, orthodox
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some disadvantages for all crimes. One of the major disadvantages of it is that a person who plans a violent crime with clear intention should not receive the
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punishment
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as someone who acts in self-defence.
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, my friend
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by his enemy and he had
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a knife
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. He had
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hand. Another important demerit is that all crimes are not committed under the
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circumstances. In conclusion, many individuals think that having orthodox
punishment
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for all crimes may be efficient.
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,
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fixed
punishment
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can offer several positives, there may be some drawbacks too.
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