The graph below gives information about annual rainfall in Brazilia between 2001 and 2011

The graph below gives information about annual rainfall in Brazilia between 2001 and 2011
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The bar graph illustrates monthly-rain in Brazilia from 2001 to 2011.
Overall
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, the number of usual
rain drops
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raindrops
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throughout the year
reach
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reaches
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its peak in the first and
last
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month of every year. Even though the trend decreased steadily in the middle of the year, which in July was only 8,7
millimetres
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. The total number of
rainfall
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in January was 247,4
millimetres
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and in December was 246,0
millimetres
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. Those two months
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became the highest month of
rainfall
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for eleven years.
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figure witnessed a steady dwindle from January to June. In February the annual
rainfall
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was 217.5
millimetres
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,
dropped
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to 180.6
millimetres
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in March.
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, in April it was 123,8
millimetres
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and in May it was 38,6
millimetres
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, until the lowest month of
rainfall
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in June, 8,7
millimeters
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millimetres
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.
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after June, which from July to December gradually rises, the number of rain drop in Brazilia.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millimetres, rainfall with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drops" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual rainfall
  • millimeters
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • anomaly
  • climatic event
  • precipitation
  • hydrological cycle
  • evaporation
  • condensation
  • meteorological data
  • arid
  • humid
  • drought
  • flood
  • sustainable water management
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