You have just started a course in a college wich has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter Introduce yourself Say why you are interested in this sports club Ask some questions about club e.g. facilities, members, costs

Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to request your help following a change in my circumstances. My name is Pulat and I have been studying in my new
college
for two weeks
wich
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was introduced by my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed the first week of the
studiying
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studying
, because I was really pleased with the quality of education there.
However
, after
that
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I experienced an unacceptable problem. Now I am extremely dissatisfied with the
college
where I am
studiying
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studying
, because it doesn't have any
sports
facilities of
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own. I just can't imagine my life without
sports
and I am really interested in playing football, but in my
college
doesn't exist any
playing-fields
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. After struggling with the director of my
college
, I convinced him to let me start a course in
private
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a private
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sports
club.
That is
my self-introduction. Now, I have some questions for you. First of all, can your
college
provide good
sports
facilities?
Secondly
, how much do your courses cost? I can only start a course if I
will be
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able to pay
it
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.
Thirdly
, are your club members friendly to each other? In my
college
, students were so rude and that made me unhappy. I would be grateful if you could look into the matter as soon as possible. Thank you in advance for your help and I will look forward
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your reply. Yours faithfully Pulat
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that you provide a clear introduction, supporting paragraphs, and a conclusion to enhance the structure and flow of your writing. Each paragraph should present a single, clear idea.
task achievement
Address all parts of the prompt by introducing yourself, explaining your interest in the sports club, and asking relevant questions. Make sure all questions are specific and related to the purpose of your letter.
task achievement
Use an appropriate tone for a formal letter: stay polite, direct, and concise without being overly personal or informal.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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