You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claim that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter Say which point in the articles you agree with. Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres. Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to bring your attention to some factual

mistake

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which were published in

newspaper

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a newspaper

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article

dated 22nd August 2023. There are some discrepancies in

article

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the article

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, which I like to mention in

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letter.

First,

the articles have correctly mentioned

about

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that

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surrey

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Surrey

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and Bristol

town

centre

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centres

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look similar. Their history, both famous

town

centres are covered accurately. Details of origin

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and venue of

town

centres have been mentioned with correct data.

However

, Milton

town

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Town Centre

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centre

history and design of

building

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the building

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mentioned is factually incorrect. The building of

town

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the town

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centre

200-year-old

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200 years old

whereas

, in the

article

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it is mentioned as

epoch

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year old. The design is

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a gothic

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gothic

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style of buildings where it is mentioned as

roman

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Roman

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style design. The

town

centre

is of historical importance and attracts

myriad

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a myriad

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of tourists. I am

also

freely available on weekends. I can give

guided

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a guided

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tour to

author

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the author

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of the

article

so that he can accept that

information

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the information

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given about Milton is inaccurate. The guided tour will include all the important places

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town

centres. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Jim Marsh,

Submitted by yash334 on Fri Feb 09 2024

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Introduction

Ensure that your introduction clearly states your position on the topic in the prompt, which in this case is partially disagreeing with the article's opinion on town centres looking similar.

Coherence

Maintain a clear and consistent stance throughout your letter on areas you agree and disagree with. Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of your argument.

Linking

Use appropriate linking words to better connect your ideas and paragraphs, such as 'Furthermore,' 'Additionally,' 'However,' or 'Consequently' to improve flow and coherence.

Content

When discussing how your town centre differs, include detailed comparisons and examples to provide a more comprehensive and convincing response.

Closing

Finish your letter with a clear and polite closing statement. Sign off with an appropriate phrase followed by your name to maintain an appropriate formal tone.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

187 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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