You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claim that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter Say which point in the articles you agree with. Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres. Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to bring your attention to some factual

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which were published in

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article

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dated 22nd August 2023. There are some discrepancies in

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, which I like to mention in

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letter.

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the articles have correctly mentioned

about

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surrey

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and Bristol

town

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centre

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look similar. Their history, both famous

town

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centres are covered accurately. Details of origin

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and venue of

town

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centres have been mentioned with correct data.

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, Milton

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town

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centre

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history and design of

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mentioned is factually incorrect. The building of

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town

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centre

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200-year-old

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, in the

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article

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it is mentioned as

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year old. The design is

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a gothic

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gothic

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style of buildings where it is mentioned as

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style design. The

town

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centre

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is of historical importance and attracts

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of tourists. I am

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freely available on weekends. I can give

guided

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tour to

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of the

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so that he can accept that

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given about Milton is inaccurate. The guided tour will include all the important places

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town

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centres. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Jim Marsh,

yash334Fri Feb 09 2024

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Introduction

Ensure that your introduction clearly states your position on the topic in the prompt, which in this case is partially disagreeing with the article's opinion on town centres looking similar.

Coherence

Maintain a clear and consistent stance throughout your letter on areas you agree and disagree with. Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of your argument.

Linking

Use appropriate linking words to better connect your ideas and paragraphs, such as 'Furthermore,' 'Additionally,' 'However,' or 'Consequently' to improve flow and coherence.

Content

When discussing how your town centre differs, include detailed comparisons and examples to provide a more comprehensive and convincing response.

Closing

Finish your letter with a clear and polite closing statement. Sign off with an appropriate phrase followed by your name to maintain an appropriate formal tone.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

187 words

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