The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014.

Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph provides information about how much
jam
(
Margarine
, Low fat and reduced spreads and
Butter
) is consumed by people in a country in Asia, over the
period
of 23 years.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that at the beginning of the
period
, the consumption of
Margarine
and
Butter
was at the same point and the other type of
jam
appeared a few years later in the
period
.
Also
, all the types of
jam
saw a downward trend except for
Low fat
Correct your spelling
Low-fat
show examples
and reduced spreads. In 1991,
Margarine
and
Butter
both stood at about 100
grams
, from
this
point on
Margarine
remained stable until 1996 and
then
experienced a falling trend and stood at around 40
grams
in 2007.
According to
Butter
, the figure went down by around 65 in 1996 and
then
continued the same trend until 2007 and ended up at approximately 45
grams
. Turning to Low fat and reduced spreads, the amount of consuming
jam
was nearly 10
grams
and
then
there was a sharp rise to around 80 in 2000, after that, the rate fell to about 70
at the end
of the
period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words jam, margarine, butter, period, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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  • consumption
  • upward trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
  • popular
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