The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014.

Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph provides information about how much
jam
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(
Margarine
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, Low fat and reduced spreads and
Butter
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) is consumed by people in a country in Asia, over the
period
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of 23 years.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that at the beginning of the
period
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, the consumption of
Margarine
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and
Butter
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was at the same point and the other type of
jam
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appeared a few years later in the
period
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.
Also
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, all the types of
jam
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saw a downward trend except for
Low fat
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Low-fat
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and reduced spreads. In 1991,
Margarine
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and
Butter
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both stood at about 100
grams
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, from
this
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point on
Margarine
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remained stable until 1996 and
then
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experienced a falling trend and stood at around 40
grams
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in 2007.
According to
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Butter
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, the figure went down by around 65 in 1996 and
then
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continued the same trend until 2007 and ended up at approximately 45
grams
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. Turning to Low fat and reduced spreads, the amount of consuming
jam
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was nearly 10
grams
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and
then
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there was a sharp rise to around 80 in 2000, after that, the rate fell to about 70
at the end
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of the
period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words jam, margarine, butter, period, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • upward trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
  • popular
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