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the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculturl land becomes less productive . The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. 28

the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculturl land becomes less productive . The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. 28
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commen
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common
 causes that affected
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agriculturl
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agricultural
agriculture
 productivity. the table depicts the impact of these reasons on three countries in 1990.
overall
, based on the
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data
 over-grazing is the
domnent
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dominant
 cause of worldwide land degradation.
while
Europe
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 lands
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 affected the most by
deforestion
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deforestation
,
Oceania
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the Oceania
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 region
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 by over-grazing.
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 the main reason
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 degradation is over-grazing at 35%, followed by deforestation and over-cultivation at 30% and 28%
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respectively
. Europe had a crucial land degraded in
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 of 23% caused by deforestation by 9.8%,
beside
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 that
over-cutivation
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over-cultivation
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 affected by 7.7%. Oceania lands most degraded by over-grazing at11.3%.
On the other hand
, the least affected region is North America at
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 of 5% most of it is by over-cultivation.
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