The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The table
provide
the same Change the verb form
provides
weekened
in Correct your spelling
week
Sydney
, Australia and Use synonyms
London
, UK about the temperatures and Use synonyms
hours
of daylight in December 2018.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
temperature
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on
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in
London
was lower than Use synonyms
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Sydney
. Change preposition
in Sydney
Whereas
, the Linking Words
temperature
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on
Sedney increased through the days Change preposition
in
while
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on
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in
London
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is
fluctuated. The sunrise Correct your spelling
it
on
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in
London
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was began
later than Change the verb form
began
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Sydney
and it opposed Change preposition
in Sydney
to
the sunset which started Change preposition
apply
on
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in
London
earlier than Use synonyms
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Sydney
.
It can Change preposition
in Sydney
deduced
from Change the verb form
be deduced
this
table that the Linking Words
temperature
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on
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in
London
was fluctuated, which was the maximum Use synonyms
began
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beginning
with
9C Change preposition
at
then
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increased
steadily to 13C Wrong verb form
increasing
then
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falled
to 10C. The minimum degree observed was on Correct your spelling
fell
Satudurday
19th which was 3C. Correct your spelling
Saturday
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
temperature
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on
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in
Sydney
was Use synonyms
doubled
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double
than
Correct word choice
that
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London
, It started Change preposition
in London
with
26C on Change preposition
at
friday
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Friday
then
it had Linking Words
slow
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a slow
increased
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increase
reached
on Sunday 31C. On Friday 28th was the lowest degree Correct word choice
and reached
recoarded
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recorded
on
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in
Sydney
by 17C.
The Sunrise started at 05:45 Use synonyms
on
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in
Sydney
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while
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on
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in
London
started after around 2 Use synonyms
hours
at 8:05. The Sunset on Use synonyms
London
began after the Sunrise about 8 Use synonyms
hours
which was the doubled on Use synonyms
Sydney
which was almost taken 14 Use synonyms
hours
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sydney, london, hours, temperature, c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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