The diagrams show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The diagrams show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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The given diagram illustrates how
salmon
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grows in natural sources, from start to finish.  At a glance, it can be observed that there are three steps for the production, beginning with laying some eggs in an upper zone of a
river
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,
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and culminating in an adult
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of
salmon
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which can reproduce the first
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phase
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of its life cycle.
Initially
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, it is evident that after getting out from the eggs which have been layed for approximately 5-6 months at the upper zone of a
river
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, some fry salmons, a young state of a
salmon
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which is the outcome of its initial phrase, move to a lower part of a
river
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which has a faster flowing of the water, and live there for around four years before turning into a smolt
salmon
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which is approximtely 12-15 cm. long. In the subsequent stage, those smolt salmons relocate their inhabitance to live in an open sea.
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, after living there for five years, these salmons eventually transform into an adult stage;
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, they come back to the upper zone of a
river
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to produce some eggs for
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next generation.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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