The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
consumption
of fast Use synonyms
food
(Use synonyms
Pizza
, Use synonyms
Hamburgers
, Use synonyms
Fish
and Chips) among young people in Australia between 1975 and 2000. Use synonyms
Overall
, there was a significant increase in fast Linking Words
food
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consumption
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such
as Linking Words
Hamburgers
and Use synonyms
Pizza
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while
the Linking Words
other
decreased year by year.
In 1975, the number of fast Fix the agreement mistake
others
food
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consumption
both Use synonyms
Pizza
and Use synonyms
Hamburger
moderately increased Fix the agreement mistake
Hamburgers
while
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Fish
and Chips decreased gradually. In the meantime, Use synonyms
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Hamburgers
rates reached a peak in 1985 followed by Fix the agreement mistake
Hamburger
Pizza
in 1995. On Use synonyms
other
hand, between 1980 to 1985 Correct article usage
the other
Fish
and Cips increased slowly but decreased sharply from 1985 to 2000. Between 1985 and 2000, Use synonyms
Pizza
reached the highest Use synonyms
consumption
of nearly 100 per year among the others followed by Use synonyms
Hamburgers
at nearly 85 rates. In Use synonyms
contrary
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contrast
Fish
and Chips between 1985 and 2000 decreased sharply from 90 to 38 rates and remained as the lowest fast Use synonyms
food
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consumption
among the others.Use synonyms
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