The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
consumption
of fast food
(Pizza
, Hamburgers
, Fish
and Chips) among young people in Australia between 1975 and 2000. Overall
, there was a significant increase in fast food
consumption
such
as Hamburgers
and Pizza
while
the other
decreased year by year.
In 1975, the number of fast Fix the agreement mistake
others
food
consumption
both Pizza
and Hamburger
moderately increased Fix the agreement mistake
Hamburgers
while
Fish
and Chips decreased gradually. In the meantime, Hamburgers
rates reached a peak in 1985 followed by Fix the agreement mistake
Hamburger
Pizza
in 1995. On other
hand, between 1980 to 1985 Correct article usage
the other
Fish
and Cips increased slowly but decreased sharply from 1985 to 2000. Between 1985 and 2000, Pizza
reached the highest consumption
of nearly 100 per year among the others followed by Hamburgers
at nearly 85 rates. In contrary
, Correct your spelling
contrast
Fish
and Chips between 1985 and 2000 decreased sharply from 90 to 38 rates and remained as the lowest fast food
consumption
among the others.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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