Social media websites have amused large user bases. Do the advantages of being a part of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

There is an ongoing debate about the

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number of consumers. My perspective is,

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being a part of social

media

can have

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harmful

aspects, there are several

advatages

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advantages

which overshadow the drawbacks. The following paragraphs will

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discuss

this

assertion.

To begin

with, there are huge advantages

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utilizing the

internet

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it made

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large

scale, which

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the way for

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qualified interaction with whomever via social

media

.

This

leads to a suitable relationship between residents without being

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distributed

by geographical

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boundaries

. In fact,

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consuming the

internet

, individuals are able to have

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sustainble

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sustainable

communication

with

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over

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long-haul distances.

For example

, an individual in

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can have

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substantial interaction with a person in

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Australia

with the

accessiblity

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accessibility

of mobile phones and social

media

.

This

means that the more social

media

expands, the more significantly wealthy interaction residents will

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.

Second,

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issue can be beneficial for a standard livelihood. It has been

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considered

that with the

availibility

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availability

of the

internet

, there

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vast

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number of job

oppurtounities

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opportunities

for

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skilled

workers. In the modern era, because of the existence of the

internet

, there are more well-educated people who are suitable for

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jobs. In other

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,

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criteria

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the way for a

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qualified

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torturing

tutoring

service since it will provide a wide range of information.

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will

lead to

a well-informed students

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well-informed students

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with a

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considerable

amount of knowledge which can be used to find work and have a wealthy living condition with a well-planned income.

Thus

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socila

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social

media

make

communication

easier, but

also

it is

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useful

in education for a better understanding.

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considered

that the

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has numerous drawbacks. In terms of

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, some

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that social

media

are a type of modern addiction.

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that in recent decades there

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of people using the

internet

several hours a day.

This

means that individuals are consuming their essential time

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in front

of mobile phones or laptops which will have

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a distructive

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distructive

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destructive

effect on their livelihood. In other

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,

this

matter will lead to distraction

while

working and less productivity in

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or at home.

Moreover

, the

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social

media

cancen

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can

eliminate the urge for face-to-face social

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interaction

interactions

which can cause challenges for residents. Not being able to have

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qualified face-to-face

communication

with people can

exaccerbate

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exacerbate

the social life of

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the

person.

This

will cause anxiety and several mental illnesses that can not be cured unless with too much effort.

However

, these effects can be limited with

srict regualtions

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strict regulations

and supervision of parents and

govrnments

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governments

to prevent any

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damage

to

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and mental health of the resident. In conclusion, my point of view is,

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even though

there are several disadvantages

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social

media

,

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since it can boost the quality of

communication

and a wealthy

lifetyle

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lifestyle

, the

advanteges

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advantages

of

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matter outweigh the drawbacks.