The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

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THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES HOW THE

TEMPERATURES

CHANGE BY THE MONTH IN TWO AUSTRALIAN

CITIES

. THE BAR CHART DEMONSTRATES THE AVERAGE NUMBER OF

DAYS

WITH

RAINFALL

IN TWO AUSTRALIAN

CITIES

IN A YEAR.

OVERALL

, IN THE MIDDLE MONTHS OF THE YEAR,

TEMPERATURES

ARE LOWER THAN EARLIER AND

LAST

MONTHS OF THE YEAR IN

BOTH

CITIES

IN ADDITION

, THE NUMBER OF

DAYS

WITH

RAINFALL

IS THE HIGHEST IN

BRISBANE

EXCEPT FROM JUNE TO SEPTEMBER WHEN

CANBERRA

ACCOUNTED FOR MORE

RAINFALL

DAYS

. AVERAGE DAILY

TEMPERATURES

ARE EXPERIENCED IN FEBRUARY WHEN

BOTH

MINIMUM AND MAXIMUM ARE TOPMOST IN

BOTH

CITIES

CANBERRA

COMPRISES FOR AT LEAST 14

DAYS

AND MAXIMUM OF 27

DAYS

WHILE

BRISBANE

ACCOUNTS BETWEEN 20-30

DAYS

ACCORDING TO

THE MINIMUM AND MAXIMUM DAILY

TEMPERATURES

FURTHERMORE

BOTH

BRISBAND AND

CANBERRA

EXHIBIT DROPS UNTIL AUGUST AND IN AUGUST, THE MAXIMUM AND MINIMUM TEMPERATURE OF BRISBAND DECLINE FROM 30 TO 23 AND 21 TO 10 DEGREES;

HOWEVER

, THE MINIMUM TEMPERATURE OF

BRISBANE

IS EXTREMELY CLOSE TO 0, AND

NONETHELESS

MAXIMUM CAN BE AROUND 10 DEGREE. REGARDING THE BAR GRAPH, IN MOST OF THE MONTHS,

BRISBANE

INDICATES MORE

DAYS

WITH

RAINFALL

COMPARED TO

CANBERRA

. IN FEBRUARY AND MARCH,

BRISBANE

SHOWS AN UPWARD TREND AND REACHES A PEAK WITHIN 14

DAYS

BY CONTRAST

, FROM JUNE TO SEPTEMBER,

CANBERRA

ACCOUNTED FOR THE SUPREME WITH 10

DAYS

OF THE MONTH.

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The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

In many cities there is a lack of space to develop and as a result, in order to modernize, old buildings are demolished and replaces with new buildings. What are the disadvantages of knocking down old building? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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According to observations, some animal species have become extinct or endangered in recent decades. What are reasons behind this tendency? What effects it may have on ecosystem in general?

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