The charts below show the number of reasons why some people leave UK and why some people choose to stay.
The pie charts illustrate
about
several causes why a number of individuals have Change preposition
apply
tendency
to live United Kingdom and some reasons of Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
people
Use synonyms
to
leave that country. Fix the infinitive
apply
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
decision
to abandon Correct article usage
the decision
Use synonyms
UK
and stay in Correct article usage
the UK
this
country Linking Words
Add a missing verb
was because
because
family & friends, employment and financial reasons.
Looking in more detail, there were some factors which contributed in terms of why residents Add the preposition
because of
to leave
Britain and Change the verb form
left
move
Wrong verb form
moved
in
another state. Mostly, about 37% of Change preposition
to
people
desired to go to another nation because they looked for quality of life. The second major factor was Use synonyms
about
financial matters that Change preposition
apply
was
required in order to Change the verb form
were
fulfill
the basic requirement of life, and about 24% Change the spelling
fulfil
Use synonyms
people
were included in Change preposition
of people
this
factor. On Linking Words
another side
, 12% Replace the word
the other hand
individuals
desire to abandon Change preposition
of individuals
Use synonyms
UK
because of Correct article usage
the UK
weather
and 18% because of employment. Correct article usage
the weather
Then
, Family and friends were Linking Words
contributor
Change the noun form
contributors
for
9% Change preposition
to
Use synonyms
people
Change preposition
of people
to leave
Wrong verb form
leaving
Use synonyms
UK
.
In the meantime, other Correct article usage
the UK
people
Use synonyms
also
have many Linking Words
consideration
to still stay in Fix the agreement mistake
considerations
Use synonyms
UK
. Correct article usage
the UK
Majority
Correct article usage
The majority
Use synonyms
people
about 43% had Change preposition
of people
tendency
to live Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
Use synonyms
UK
because of the existence of their family and friends in Correct article usage
the UK
this
place. Linking Words
In addition
, the social life matter became the second reason for 21% of Linking Words
people
to keep their existence in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
UK
. Folks Correct article usage
the UK
also
considered Linking Words
others factor
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other factors
such
as 15% for Linking Words
the
financial resources or employment and 11% for language.Correct article usage
apply
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