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The table below shows population figures for 4 countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.

The table below shows population figures for 4 countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.
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The table below represents statistics about population amounts for 4 countries
for
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 2003 and
prediction
 figures for 2025 and 2050.
Overall
,it is evident that
Asian
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the Asian
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 country Indonesia
have
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 the biggest
numbers
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number
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 of
prediction
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predictions
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,
while
in
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opposite
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the opposite
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 side Italy
have
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contrary
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a contrary
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 trend. To
commece
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commence
commerce
 with countries from South America and Asia have
positive
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a positive
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prediction
 of population,
moreover
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 the biggest figures in
this
 statistics
belongs
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 to Indonesia,which made up 238
million
 in 2003 and 312
million
 in 2050,respectively.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
country
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countries
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 from South America,which was Argentina have the same trend,which
accaunted
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accounted
accounts
 for 34
million
 in 2003 and 62
million
 in 2050. When it comes to
opposite
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 side, which was statistics from Italy,which comprised 54
million
 in 2003 and
then
 gradually
fall
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 in 2025 for 47
million
.In 2050
prediction
 for Italy made up 45
million
,respectively. It may be concluded from the table that countries from South America and Asia have positive
prediction
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predictions
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 of population in 2025 and 2050.
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