The table below shows population figures for 4 countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.
The table below represents statistics about population amounts for 4 countries
for
2003 and Change preposition
in
prediction
figures for 2025 and 2050.
Overall
,it is evident that Asian
country Indonesia Correct article usage
the Asian
have
the biggest Change the verb form
has
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
prediction
,Fix the agreement mistake
predictions
while
in
Change preposition
on
opposite
side Italy Correct article usage
the opposite
have
Change the verb form
has
contrary
trend.
To Add an article
a contrary
commece
with countries from South America and Asia have Correct your spelling
commence
commerce
positive
Add an article
a positive
the positive
prediction
of population,moreover
the biggest figures in Add a comma
moreover,
this
statistics belongs
to Indonesia,which made up 238 Change the verb form
belong
million
in 2003 and 312 million
in 2050,respectively.Futhermore
Correct your spelling
Furthermore
country
from South America,which was Argentina have the same trend,which Fix the agreement mistake
countries
accaunted
for 34 Correct your spelling
accounted
accounts
million
in 2003 and 62 million
in 2050.
When it comes to opposite
side, which was statistics from Italy,which comprised 54 Add an article
the opposite
million
in 2003 and then
gradually fall
in 2025 for 47 Wrong verb form
fell
million
.In 2050 prediction
for Italy made up 45 million
,respectively.
It may be concluded from the table that countries from South America and Asia have positive prediction
of population in 2025 and 2050.Fix the agreement mistake
predictions
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