You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter - Say which part- time course you booked - Explain why you need to cancel your booking - Ask about booking a different course

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Dear Madam, I am writing about

English

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the English

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Course

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. Two weeks ago I registered for

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the English

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Course

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I must

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apply

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come every evening to school for

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course

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the course

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however

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, I need to cancel my membership. I tried to come

everyday

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every

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however

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I am working 10 hours

ın

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apply

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a day. So, I can not

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apply

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school

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at school

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during

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course

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hours. Please cancel my

rezervation

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reservation

course

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. Except

this

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, when ı looked

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language

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website ı saw another

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course

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. Some

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course

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courses

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are more

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avaible

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available

for me.

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Spanish

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a Spanish

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language

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course

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every weekend morning and I

really

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am really

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ınterested

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interested

this

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course

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. If

this

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course

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is avaible

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avaible

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available

, maybe I can register again

this

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course

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. I will continue

this

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course

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I'm

sure. Maybe one day I can travel to Spain and after that,

this

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course

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can be

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apply

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easier to speak

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my trip. I am

waiting

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waiting for

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your feedback, please write me

e mail

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again. Kind

Regars

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Regards

, Kağan

kagancihan9Sat Feb 10 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph carries a separate point or idea, to maintain clarity and structure.

greeting and closing

Work on greeting and closing structure to make it more appropriate and formal for a letter.

task achievement

To improve task response, make sure to address all parts of the prompt clearly and expand on each point.

task achievement

Use a more formal tone and clear expressions to suit the task of writing to a college administrator.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

153 words

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