Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to takle the issue?

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Nowadays we have a significant problem in the world , it is called global warming. The earth" is going to increase steadily and if we do not have useful plans and do not take important measures, it will have a large proportion of negative effects on our planet. I want to talk about why
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phenomenon happens and how the leaders and society
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tackle it in
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essay. First of all, I want to explain the causes of global warming. The individual uses more petrol cars than public transportation
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the fact that we do not have a good public transportation system.
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,
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system is not sufficient and fast for folk,
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, whether an employer wants to go to work, he prefers to go to his occupation by his car because he may arrive at his office late.
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, cutting down the
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has had a considerable growth in the recent decade.
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, the government needs to construct more houses
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the development of the population,
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they fell the
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and demolished the green spaces
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as forests and jungles to have more space for making places that are suitable for living for their community. In my opinion, the best solution for
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issue is promoting the public transportation system in view of the fact that folk use more bus or metro if they are fast and comfortable enough for them.
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, authorities should raise and plant lots of
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or they should build their structures in some environments where there are not many
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. It seems to me, with the advancement of technology some machines are built which do not need fossil fuels,
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, they move with electricity power. So, these cars can help dramatically
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solve global warming. In conclusion, we are arguing about a remarkable problem and it is global warming.
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disaster happened
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a variety
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of reasons
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such
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as cutting down
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. The government can handle it by
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many
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or advertising electric cars a lot to encourage people to buy
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product.
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