These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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Teaching used to be one of the most prestigious jobs in many countries in the past.

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, nowadays, it has become less attractive which means not many young people aspire to become

teachers

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. In my view, there are several factors leading to

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and I will discuss some of them in the following paragraphs

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suggesting some solutions. We should consider several reasons why today's youngsters do not want to choose a teaching career.

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, a low salary is a major deterrent for many young people.

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, they look for another profession which offers

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higher pay

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perks.

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students can cause stress

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teachers

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job quite exhausting and stressful. Another reason is

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heavy workload that school

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have to deal with in their daily lives, being usually snowed under with paperwork and other responsibilities, which means they do not have enough time and energy to spend with their families.

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, in many countries, including the UK,

teachers

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organize strikes, with some even quitting to get another job.

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, governments can take several measures to alleviate

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problem. First of all,

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should be offered

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reasonable pay compared to other professions with similar responsibilities. Because

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there are many people who work in different fields

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as in banks or other sectors who receive higher

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. Another solution would be

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parents fully responsible for their children's

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should provide knowledge and education

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of focusing on the upbringing of students. A solution for the third problem is to reduce the amount of work pressure

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teachers

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by hiring more assistants.

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will help

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cut the burden of the job and make

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profession less stressful. In conclusion, education plays a vital role in every society's development.

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, governments should take necessary steps in dealing with issues in education, including teaching by offering higher salaries, reducing workload and so on.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Your opinion

in the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Show advantage and disadvantage

Some people think that mothers should spend most of their time raising their family, and therefore the government should support them financially. Do you agree or disagree?

It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture.We can learn as much as from books, films, and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people say in order to prevent illness and diseases, government should focus on reducing environment pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.