You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite a close friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: invite him to stay and suggest a date briefly describe the new house and garden say why you like your new house.
Dear Arun,
Hi, how are you? I hope you are doing well and everything is good for you. I feel gorgeous
,
when we see the Remove the comma
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last
moment.
Firstly
,I want to invite to you my new home.do you know my old house in my hometown, it's quite small and ends of
a small narrow street.Change preposition
on
This
house does not enough
parking area. Add a missing verb
have enough
Therefore
we move to a new area near my uncle stay.
Moreover
, my detached row flat is so nice and spacious facility too.The big living hall and three rooms with shower and toilets attached. also
a small garden behind. My father very happy habit of planting.Big
size kitchen makes it comfortable for my mother.Correct article usage
The big
As well as
my car park place is sufficient.
I feel proud to have this
.
I would be so glad if you came, we will have coffee in my garden area and my mother is very close to you also
, she will welcome you with a great lunch and dinner. You can stay in my guest room at night time.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
best regards,
Tharun.Submitted by venkatlinga81 on
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greeting and closing
Remember to start your letter with a proper greeting and end with an appropriate closing. In this case, you could have started with 'Dear [Friend's name],' and closed with 'Warm regards, [Your name]. Use capital letters for names and the beginning of sentences to follow standard English conventions.
logical structure
Provide a clear, logical structure to your letter by organizing it into clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should contain a single idea. For example, the first paragraph could be the invitation, the second could describe the house, and the third could explain why you like it.
complete response
The letter needs to fully address the three bullet points in the task. Make sure to include an explicit invitation with a suggested date, describe the house and garden, and express why you like the house. Provide more details and structure your letter to clearly cover these points.
single idea per paragraph
Use connectors and transition words to improve coherence between sentences and paragraphs. This will help the letter to flow better and make it easier to read. Also, try to keep each paragraph focused on a single idea.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.