The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart illustrates the total number of
minutes
in
billions
of telephone calls in the
UK
and
divided
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is divided
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into three call categories which are local-fixed
line
, national and international-fixed
line
and mobiles( all calls ) from between 1995 and 2002 .
Overall
, the local-fixed
line
call type in the
UK
marked the higher number in
billions
compared to other call categories.
It is clear that
since 1995
local-fixed
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the local
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line
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lines
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grew
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considerably and reached
the
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peak point at 90
minutes
in
billions
in 1999 but
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to
dropped
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and ended
to
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72
minutes
in
billions
in 2002.Meanwhile, the national and
international-fixed
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international fixed
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line
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lines
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in the
UK
showed positive trends and grew steadily since 1995 with started point at 38
minutes
in
billions
until reached
the
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peak point at 62
minutes
in
billions
in 2002.
In addition
, in 1995 the mobile ( all calls ) in the
UK
started at the lower figure with 5
minutes
in
billions
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billion
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and slowly went up gradually to 48
minutes
in
billions
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billion
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in 2001 but slightly decreased in
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the figure
a figure
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figure
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figures
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in 2002 with 45
minutes
in
bilion
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billion
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • telecommunications
  • landline
  • mobile phones
  • local calls
  • national and international calls
  • billion
  • minutes
  • growth
  • decrease
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • overtake
  • peak
  • plummet
  • steady
  • significant
  • minor
  • chart
  • period
  • comparison
  • category
  • data
  • illustrate
  • reveal
  • indicate
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