The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan

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The two maps give information about the development plans of Bunborough

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these days and in 2024.

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, the main road in the

village

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of Bunborough will extend in the future and tourism facilities

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as hotels and promenades will be added. First of all, the villagers in the present day just can only access one main road to visit Lynwich.

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, there are no other public transportation options available in

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village

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. On the coast, there is a fishing port. In 2024 the

village

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will have two options road and new public transportation when want to visit Lynwich.

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, in the future, the

village

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income will change to tourism because there will be built some hotel. The government will remove the fishing port and replace it with promenades near the beach. There are no changes

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the shopping centre and the beach. After that, some houses will be replaced by railway tracks.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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