The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan

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The two maps give information about the development plans of Bunborough

Village

these days and in 2024.

Overall

, the main road in the

village

of Bunborough will extend in the future and tourism facilities

such

as hotels and promenades will be added. First of all, the villagers in the present day just can only access one main road to visit Lynwich.

Then

, there are no other public transportation options available in

this

village

. On the coast, there is a fishing port. In 2024 the

village

will have two options road and new public transportation when want to visit Lynwich.

However

, in the future, the

village

income will change to tourism because there will be built some hotel. The government will remove the fishing port and replace it with promenades near the beach. There are no changes

with

Change preposition

show examples

the shopping centre and the beach. After that, some houses will be replaced by railway tracks.

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