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The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.

The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.
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The line chart shows Oregon state
population
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 in three countries namely Columbia,
Yamhill
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 and Washington from 1940 to 2000.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
population
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 increased gradually until the end of the period. Columbia and
Yamhill
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 have
a similar patterns
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a similar pattern
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. Yamhil stood at approaching 30.000 populations.
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there was a steady rise in the
population
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 in 1970.
Then
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, the number of inhabitants increased sharply in 2000 to about 65.000 people.
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Yamhill
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 began with exactly 30.000 folks. After that, the
population
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 gradually increased by about 15000 individuals in 1970.
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, in 2000, there was a significant gain in the
population
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 of
Yamhill
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.
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, Washington
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 interpolated in the following year.
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, Washington had 75.000 residents in total.
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there was a dramatic increase of over 120.000 in local people number in 1970. Thirty years later,
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population
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the population
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 started to rise sharply about 240.000 people.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "next, ".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, yamhill with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Census
  • Migration
  • Infrastructural development
  • Economic impact
  • Urbanization
  • Rural to urban shift
  • Growth rate
  • Satellite cities
  • Migration patterns
  • Local economy
  • Population density
  • Service provision
  • Housing market
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Population spike
  • Sustainable growth
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