The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.

The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the

 different increasing.
The line chart shows Oregon state
population
in three countries namely Columbia,
Yamhill
and Washington from 1940 to 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
population
increased gradually until the end of the period. Columbia and
Yamhill
have
a similar patterns
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a similar pattern
similar patterns
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. Yamhil stood at approaching 30.000 populations.
Next,
there was a steady rise in the
population
in 1970.
Then
, the number of inhabitants increased sharply in 2000 to about 65.000 people.
While
Yamhill
began with exactly 30.000 folks. After that, the
population
gradually increased by about 15000 individuals in 1970.
Finally
, in 2000, there was a significant gain in the
population
of
Yamhill
.
In addition
, Washington
also
interpolated in the following year.
To begin
, Washington had 75.000 residents in total.
Next,
there was a dramatic increase of over 120.000 in local people number in 1970. Thirty years later,
population
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the population
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started to rise sharply about 240.000 people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Census
  • Migration
  • Infrastructural development
  • Economic impact
  • Urbanization
  • Rural to urban shift
  • Growth rate
  • Satellite cities
  • Migration patterns
  • Local economy
  • Population density
  • Service provision
  • Housing market
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Population spike
  • Sustainable growth
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