The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.
The line chart shows Oregon state
population
in three countries namely Columbia, Yamhill
and Washington from 1940 to 2000. Overall
, it can be seen that the population
increased gradually until the end of the period.
Columbia and Yamhill
have a similar patterns
. Yamhil stood at approaching 30.000 populations. Correct the article-noun agreement
a similar pattern
similar patterns
Next,
there was a steady rise in the population
in 1970. Then
, the number of inhabitants increased sharply in 2000 to about 65.000 people. While
Yamhill
began with exactly 30.000 folks. After that, the population
gradually increased by about 15000 individuals in 1970. Finally
, in 2000, there was a significant gain in the population
of Yamhill
.
In addition
, Washington also
interpolated in the following year. To begin
, Washington had 75.000 residents in total. Next,
there was a dramatic increase of over 120.000 in local people number in 1970. Thirty years later, population
started to rise sharply about 240.000 people.Add an article
the population
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