In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

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are becoming cheaper day-by-day

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and widespread in some countries.

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there are some

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these

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, some key disadvantages can outweigh them. On the one hand, some

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think that merits are more than demerits, and all of these

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help

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to spend less

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to eat

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, we spend less

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to eat

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these

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of

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can be an opportunity for us to work both hard and much

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fast

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are very convenient to eat compared to our natural

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because, if we want to eat natural one, we should allocate some place but with fast

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we need not choose any place where we can eat these

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of

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in any place

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as on the way or

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going to school.

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, I believe that the key disadvantages of fast food can outweigh the

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, a high amount of consumption can damage our power because

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a lot of chemicals are used in junk

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. These can damage our both health and healthy lifestyle.

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, high amounts of

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are choosing fast food as the right food to eat

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they cannot spend quality

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with their parents because, some older

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do not like these

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, and the centers of fast

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are located far from our house. In conclusion, I believe that there are colossal amounts of disadvantages which are key reasons to dodge

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fast

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to eat colossal amounts, and they can outweigh the all

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because, eating fast

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can damage our health system, in my opinion, our health is the most important for us.