Some people believe that it is better to live and work in vertical cities. Others, however, think that horizontal cities are better for living and working. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are two different

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of

cities

, which are named vertical city and horizontal city.

While

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people believe that residing in vertical

cities

provides more benefits,

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others hold the

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opposite

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idea.

This

essay will explain both sides

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and highlight vertical towns may be

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option since they prevent urban sprawl. On one hand, a group of people argue that horizontal

cities

are better for living since

this kind

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these kinds

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of

cities

offer a life in nature. To illustrate, as horizontal

cities

tend to spread, they contain several green areas and

park

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parks

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,

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ensure more connection with nature.

For example

, a worker can refresh his mind after a gruelling meeting, by walking ten minutes in a park, which is close to their workplace. Since horizontal

cities

give more opportunities to access greeneries than vertical

cities

, may provide more comfortable lives for citizens,

according to

some.

On the other hand

, proponents of vertical

cities

believe that building high-rise buildings should be accepted as an effective way to create more organised

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cities

. To clarify, as multi-storey apartments

are enable

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to host many individuals, they provide more intense areas either

residental

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residential

areas or workplaces.

Therefore

, the whole

banks

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can be built

at

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a

spesific

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specific

land, and all of the hospitals can be

contruct

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constructed

at another certain place.

For instance

, all of the hospitals have been placed

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the north part of Istanbul in recent years,

hence

transporting patients from

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hospital to another has become less risky in comparison with the past.

Finally

, I personally advocate that vertical

cities

are better

alternative

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for living, and working. One of the reasons is that constructing high-rise buildings is preventing

urban-sprawn

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urban sprawl

in city

centers

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.

In other words

, a multi-storey

apartmant

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apartment

contains nearly 60 condos,

while

a traditional

apartman

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apartment

block contains just 5 housings.

As a result

, horizontal

cities

have to spread in

otder

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order

to provide

enought

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enough

accommodations for

population

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the population

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.

Wtih

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With

the aim of preventing

urban-sprawl

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urban sprawl

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, vertical

cities

would be accepted

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better alternative.

To conclude

, when all these factors are taken into

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account, both kinds of

cities

have valid points.

While

horizontal

cities

are able to provide a life closer the nature, vertical

cities

make it possible to create more organized towns. I

personaly

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personally

support the latter idea, which

advocate

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the

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vertical

cities

, since veritval

cities

enable to

reduce

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the

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risk of

urban-sprawl

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urban sprawl

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.