The graph below shows the population of India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050.
The line graph compares the populace in two Asian countries,
India
and China
from 2000 and there is an
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the next
years
.
It is clear that
India
saw an upward trend from beginning
of the period and it will continue to grow in Add an article
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the predicted
years
. Meanwhile, China
had a steady growth until 2020 and it will decline slowly after that.
At the beginning of the new century
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century,
China
was by far more populated than India
with more than 1200 billion, on the other line, India
only saw less than 1000 billion people in
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China
is facing a slight decrease in population but India
will encounter a rise until the end of the period.
It has been anticipated that in 2030 and the next 20 years
Chinese population will remain steady at around 1400 billion, by contrast
, India
is going to have a significant increase in the same predicted years
in future.Submitted by Pbaharlou70 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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