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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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Depicted in the bar graph is the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK. The data observed was divided into three categories,
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 as the local-fixed line, national and international-fixed line, and mobiles (all calls).
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, it can be seen that the data was observed from
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 1995 to 2002.
Overall
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, it can be seen that all of the call types had some fluctuations over the years. The local-fixed line always had the highest amount of minutes of telephone calls.
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 being the highest, it started and ended with the same amount of more than 75 billion.
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, even though mobiles had a significant increase in 2001, they still placed the
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 in every
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's number of minutes.
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, mobile's peak was in 2001 with almost 60 billion. Another noteworthy aspect is the stable increase of national and international fixed lines. The trend it had, starting from the
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 1996 to 2002 never had a slight decrease. The number consistently increased
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 by
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, maintaining its position in second place.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • telecommunications
  • landline
  • mobile phones
  • local calls
  • national and international calls
  • billion
  • minutes
  • growth
  • decrease
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • overtake
  • peak
  • plummet
  • steady
  • significant
  • minor
  • chart
  • period
  • comparison
  • category
  • data
  • illustrate
  • reveal
  • indicate
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