When designing a building the function is normally more important than the outward appearance. Do you agree or disagree with this idea?

There is an ongoing debate about the design of

a

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construction

and whether the appearance of it is more essential than the

facilitis

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facilities

it posses in inward of the building. My perspective is,

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that although

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the look of a building is an important issue, the

function

of it is significantly more critical. The following paragraphs will

diccuss

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discuss

this

assertion.

To begin

with, the

function

of the

construction

paves the way for a sustainable lifestyle. It is

considred

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considered

that if a building

posses

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the

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considrabel

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considerable

amount of facilities and a well-functioned atmosphere, it will be

criticaly

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critically

critical

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suitable place to work or live.

For example

, it is

extremly

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extremely

essential for

residets

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residents

to have a substantial well-structured building which has

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qualified ventilation and

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centeral

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central

heating.

This

can lead to remarkable satisfaction among individuals that can

effectivly

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effectively

influence their living

condition

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. The more well-functioned a place is, the more quality it

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for a standard livelihood.

However

,

this

criteria

requiers

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requires

strict rules and regulations to prevent any misleading and

damag

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damage

.

Moreover

, it is considered that a

function

of a

construction

is

specificly

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specifically

cheaper than

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appearance

of

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it

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. In fact, for a well-designed

building

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building,

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there has to be a

numerous

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amount of money to

buld

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build

the outer

layor

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layer

layers

.

Although

this

matter is essential, since it will cost

much

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expenditure, it is preferable for engineers to focus on the

function

of the building.

This

means that

instead

of

puting

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putting

much effort and budget into making a place look nice, they try to focus on the

funtion

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function

of it since it is more facil and

cost effective

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.

Therefore

, by

vertue

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virtue

of the financial

beneficience

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beneficence

beneficient

of inward of a building,

constructores

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constructors

try to

focuse

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focus

on it and it became a

signifacntly

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significantly

more essential matter. In conclusion, my point of view is,

despite

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that despite

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the qualification of the outer appearance of a

construction

, the

function

of it is extremely more critical since it costs less and paves the way for a suitable lifestyle.