scientists and news media are pesenting ever more evidence of climate. Government can not expect to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. give your opinion

modern era, climate changes are increasing day by day , and many researchers and media
Add a missing verb
are alarm
show examples
Replace the word
show examples
hazard. It is not only the
is citizens'
essay will discuss both sides and my point of view is both parties should protect nature.
To begin
with, there are numerous steps that the
should mainly establish laws against those who disobey to protect the environment especially those who dispose of waste products improperly. Many companies dispose of misused solids and liquids into natural sources authorities should punish them with huge fines for their actions .
In addition
, the
have a
to conduct awareness programs and take an evaluation and implementation from every individual.
For example
, a waste collection bin system was introduced so the public could separate their wasted item appreciative way
collectors refuse their misuse for
recycling process. On the other side, an individual's initial responsibility protect their atmosphere from adjustment to life by using public transportation. Increasing the number of cars on the road leads to traffic congestion and contributes to excessive air pollution
, despite that if individuals limit private vehicles will decrease the emissions of polluted air.
, citizens should grow more and more plants without destroying forests.These green surrounding facilities' fresh air helps to maintain the ozone layer and decrease the increasing heat.
, an individual must modify their lifestyle to protect the season. In conclusion, I believe that it is not only the
the individuals's responsibility to protect the environment
climate change is unstoppable.
Submitted by ishanisachithra3 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Task Achievement
Develop your main points further with more detailed examples. Specific examples add to the strength of your argument and make your essay more convincing.
Coherence & Cohesion
Pay attention to your essay structure. Ensure that your introduction clearly states the topic and your stance, and that your conclusion effectively summarizes your argument without introducing new points.
Coherence & Cohesion
Work on paragraph cohesion. Use a range of linking phrases to connect ideas within and across paragraphs smoothly. This will make your essay more cohesive and easier to follow.
General Improvement
Review grammar and punctuation rules to minimize errors and enhance the overall fluency of your essay. Consider varying sentence structure for a more engaging read.
General Improvement
Be consistent with tense usage throughout the essay to maintain clarity and coherence.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accountability
  • conserving energy
  • carbon footprint
  • sustainable lifestyles
  • governmental interventions
  • environmental movements
  • renewable energy
  • corporate sustainability
  • economic incentives
  • consumer choices
What to do next:
Look at other essays: