The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck Country at different times of the year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The chart illustrates data about different species of
birds
which were noticed in Woodchuck County. The information is available at different times of the year.
Overall
, as it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
shown
by Add the auxiliary verb
is shown
chart
, Add an article
the chart
the
most types of Correct article usage
apply
birds
are observed in summer, only juncos is
Change the verb form
are
exception
. Add an article
an exception
the exception
However
, there are 4 species of birds
that observed
in winter (cardinals, crows, juncos and woodpeckers). Add a missing verb
are observed
Hence
, all birds
are trying to fly to warm place
. Fix the agreement mistake
places
Birds
which
known as juncos Correct pronoun usage
apply
are
stay Unnecessary verb
apply
at
Change preposition
in
cold
Add an article
the cold
a cold
place
. Fix the agreement mistake
places
While
bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos
Correct word choice
and vireos
observed
only in summer. And only 3 types of Add a missing verb
are observed
birds
can live in both situations.
Interesting
thing to noticeAdd an article
The interesting
An interesting
,
is that only one species of bird stay Remove the comma
apply
at
Change preposition
in
cold
Add an article
the cold
a cold
place
.Fix the agreement mistake
places
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