The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Tables provide information about Five different countries
who
Correct pronoun usage
that
sales
their product in 1999 and 2004 . Replace the word
sold
Overall
, Official
fair Correct article usage
the Official
price
for Banana
and Coffee in 2004 Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
experiencing
Wrong verb form
experienced
Correct article usage
an increased
increased
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increase
whereas
Denmark
and UK
Correct article usage
the UK
was
the country who get paid Correct subject-verb agreement
were
in
higher Change preposition
apply
price
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prices
whike
Sweden was the least.
Correct your spelling
whereas
According to
the data, in 1999 the higher official
agreed fair Change the word
officially
price
for Coffee is
Switzerland Correct your spelling
in
which is
about 3 Verb problem
was
million
euros
. Following that, Denmark
and UK
almost shared similar Correct article usage
the UK
payment
Fix the agreement mistake
payments
whereas
the number calculated Change preposition
with
by
1.8 Change preposition
as
million
of
Change preposition
apply
euros
for Denmark
followed by UK
1.5 million
euros
. However
, Belgium only paid less ammount
of money.
Correct your spelling
amount
On the other hand
, in 2004 the Fair price
for UK
Correct article usage
the UK
increase
dramatically to 20 Wrong verb form
increased
million
of
Change preposition
apply
euros
and Switzerland increase
Wrong verb form
increased
thereefold
higher than before. Correct your spelling
threefold
Moreover
, coffee farmer
in Fix the agreement mistake
farmers
Denmark
after five years did not show much
progression as Rephrase
as much
Belgium
and Sweden. The number just increased by 2 % from the previous years.Change preposition
in Belgium
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, denmark, uk, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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