The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Tables provide information about Five different countries
who
Correct pronoun usage
that
sales
their product in 1999 and 2004 . Replace the word
sold
Overall
, Linking Words
Official
fair Correct article usage
the Official
price
for Use synonyms
Banana
and Coffee in 2004 Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
experiencing
Wrong verb form
experienced
Correct article usage
an increased
increased
Replace the word
increase
whereas
Linking Words
Denmark
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
was
the country who get paid Correct subject-verb agreement
were
in
higher Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
price
Fix the agreement mistake
prices
whike
Sweden was the least.
Correct your spelling
whereas
According to
the data, in 1999 the higher Linking Words
official
agreed fair Change the word
officially
price
for Coffee Use synonyms
is
Switzerland Correct your spelling
in
which is
about 3 Verb problem
was
million
Use synonyms
euros
. Following that, Use synonyms
Denmark
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
UK
almost shared similar Correct article usage
the UK
payment
Fix the agreement mistake
payments
Linking Words
whereas
the number calculated Change preposition
with
by
1.8 Change preposition
as
million
Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
euros
for Use synonyms
Denmark
followed by Use synonyms
UK
1.5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
euros
. Use synonyms
However
, Belgium only paid less Linking Words
ammount
of money.
Correct your spelling
amount
On the other hand
, in 2004 the Fair Linking Words
price
for Use synonyms
Use synonyms
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
increase
dramatically to 20 Wrong verb form
increased
million
Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
euros
and Switzerland Use synonyms
increase
Wrong verb form
increased
thereefold
higher than before. Correct your spelling
threefold
Moreover
, coffee Linking Words
farmer
in Fix the agreement mistake
farmers
Denmark
after five years did not show Use synonyms
much
progression as Rephrase
as much
Belgium
and Sweden. The number just increased by 2 % from the previous years.Change preposition
in Belgium
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, denmark, uk, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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