The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.
The chart
show
the differences Change the verb form
shows
expenditure
of Change preposition
in expenditure
families
in one country by Use synonyms
earnings
in 1968 and 2018.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the highest of percentages by Linking Words
families
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
purchases
their Wrong verb form
purchasing
earning
are food in 1968, Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
while
Linking Words
the
leisure Correct article usage
apply
is
the most Verb problem
spent
earnings
spent by Use synonyms
family
in 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
families
In contrast
, Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
fuel
and Use synonyms
power
are the lowest of Use synonyms
earnings
Use synonyms
purchases
by Use synonyms
families
in 1968 and 2018.
In 1968, Food Use synonyms
is
the highest expenditure by Wrong verb form
was
families
in Use synonyms
this
country at 35%. The second Linking Words
common
Correct quantifier usage
most common
purchases
by Use synonyms
families
are housing, and clothing and footwear at 10%. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the household Linking Words
goods
have Use synonyms
similarity
percentages by spending the Replace the word
similar
earnings
with personal Use synonyms
goods
, transport, Use synonyms
fuel
and Use synonyms
power
, and leisure at over Use synonyms
of
8%. The Change preposition
apply
last
buying by Linking Words
families
are Use synonyms
fuel
and Use synonyms
power
only around Use synonyms
at
5%.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, the trend of Linking Words
families
Use synonyms
improve
after 50 years. The most common Change the verb form
improves
Use synonyms
purchases
weekly income by Fix the agreement mistake
purchase
families
is Use synonyms
the
leisure over Correct article usage
apply
at
20% in 2018. Afterwards, food and housing are the second highest Change preposition
apply
families
expenditure their money at around 18%. The household Use synonyms
goods
and transport spent by Use synonyms
families
over at 5%. The lowest Use synonyms
purchases
by Use synonyms
families
Use synonyms
earnings
are Use synonyms
fuel
and Use synonyms
power
and personal Use synonyms
goods
at less Use synonyms
that
5%.Correct word choice
than
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, earnings, purchases, fuel, power, goods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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