The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams show the proportion of using different modes of transportation and people's reasons for driving
car
in Edmonton.
Overall
, it is clear that
most of the individuals prefered to using car
instead
of using other types of transportation. In addition
, a large number of citizens told that they used car
to commute to work.
Looking at the details, driving by car
was populer than any other forms of commuting with 45 per cent, and after that LRT was the second preference of humans with 35%. As for the bus and taxi, they both allocated a mere 10% and were less selected by people.
With respect to the excuses were given by citizens for using car
, commute to work was the bolder one with 55% and after that business and taking students to school were told more with 45% and 40%, respectively. Shopping and leisure activities both with only 15% were negligible among the others.Submitted by sindokhtdadjoo2000 on
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