The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012

The bar graph

illustrate

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information about the proportion of women and men in different academic

staff

memebers

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members

such

as art, business, education, engineering,

law

, medicine and science over the faculties of the main college in one year.

Overall

, engineering and education are the most popular subjects among men and women. Meanwhile, art, business,

law

,

medicene

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medicine

and science remain insignificant over the

year

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. Looking

further

into the details, among students of engineering, there are almost 60% more males than females.

While

a large proportion of women prefer education.

However

, the percentages of male and

females

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female

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students choosing medicine of

univertisty

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university

staff

are similar. In terms of

law

, men comprise a significantly higher percentage of

law

staff

members over 50%. Meanwhile, twice as many males as females decide to science

staff

element at

univeristy

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university

. The difference in

numbers

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the numbers

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of male and female students in art

staff

remains insignificant.