The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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The picture illustrates the process of instant
noodles
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manufacture and preparation for sale in supermarkets and shops.
It is clear that
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there are 8 stages in the production of instant
noodles
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. The process begins with the flour delivery and ends at the wrapping stage. Looking at the instant
noodles
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production in detail,
first,
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flour from storage silos is transferred to a mixer and mixed with water and oil, resulting in dough.
Second,
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the rolling machines roll dough and become sheets. After that, dough sheets are cut thinly and lengthwise to form long strips.
Then
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a product stretches out, and
as a result
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, it becomes noodle discs. At the sixth stage in the process, noodle discs are cooked with oil, and the results are dried.
Next,
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these
noodles
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are already packed into cups, trailed by vegetables and spices on
the
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apply
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top of dry
noodles
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.
Finally
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, the cups are wrapped with
give
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apply
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labels and
sealing
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sealed
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before delivery to supermarkets and shops.
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