The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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The provided maps illustrate the present condition facade and the projected plans of the centre of a small town named Islip. In general, several improvements are projected, specifically in public facilities and the town's ways.

To begin

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with, there is only one main road between the shops on its right and left side.

However

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, it is planned to install a dual carriageway around the town and change the former main road into pedestrians only,

while

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one of the two sides of the shops will be demolished and changed into a Bus station, Shopping centre, Car park, and New housing. Meanwhile, in the west, specifically near the other side of the shops, there are residential areas with the park and the school.

Not to mention

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the sub-streets which lead to both places.

Nevertheless

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, the development is projected to the area with some changes like additional new housing and the sub-streets are merged with the main road.

Additionally

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, the park is minimized,

while

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the school will remain the same.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

167 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Small town
Centre
Development
Maps
Plans
Introduce
Topic
Purpose
Essay
Description
Current
Key features
Facilities
Advantages
Positive aspects
Benefits
Proposed
Changes
Improvements
Suggested
Potential
Course of action
Summarize
Opinion

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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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