The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The provided maps illustrate the present condition facade and the projected plans of the centre of a small town named Islip. In general, several improvements are projected, specifically in public facilities and the town's ways.
To begin
with, there is only one main road between the shops on its right and left side. However
, it is planned to install a dual carriageway around the town and change the former main road into pedestrians only, while
one of the two sides of the shops will be demolished and changed into a Bus station, Shopping centre, Car park, and New housing.
Meanwhile, in the west, specifically near the other side of the shops, there are residential areas with the park and the school. Not to mention
the sub-streets which lead to both places. Nevertheless
, the development is projected to the area with some changes like additional new housing and the sub-streets are merged with the main road. Additionally
, the park is minimized, while
the school will remain the same.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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