The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020,with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020,with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below illustrates the population percentage of four different Asian countries living in cities over 50
years
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between 1970 and 2020, with the expected rate of population for the next 20
years
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after
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. In general, it can be seen that all nations saw a dramatic increase over the mentioned period and is set to rise in the next 20
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too. The Philippines was the only country with a marginal decrease between 1990 and 2010, with the highest population in the number of people who lived in the cities at the start of the period.
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, Indonesia had the lowest number of urban citizens in 1970, their cities are set to be crowded and get the second rank by 2040. Despite Thailand having a striking increase by 2020, is projected to have a remarkable rise in the next 20
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with a comparison of 30% to 50 %respectively. The Philippine community prefers to stay in rural areas
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of urban areas,
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Indonesian people a huge fan of urban construction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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