The diagram shows the life of a special type of tuna fish.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of one significant type of
tuna
fish
.
Overall
, the life cycle of tuna
fish
consists of four main stages: egg, larva, juvenile, adult
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and adult
Planktons
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Plankton
tuna
swim by being transported by currents, whereas
nektons swim freely.
The life cycle of tuna
fish
begins when tuna
eggs are hatched, where they measure 1 micrometer
. Afterwards, they live as larvae inside the egg sac Change the spelling
micrometre
while
reaching 4 micrometer
and feeding on other organisms. Change to a plural noun
micrometers
Also
, Larvae cannot swim freely, so they are transported by currents. Larvae turn into juveniles where they measure twelve micrometer
and start eating voraciously.
After the Change to a plural noun
micrometers
fish
start shoaling, they are considered adult
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adults
tuna
migrates while
swimming freely In shoals. By external fertilisation, eggs are released from male and female mature tunas, and the entire journey is repeated all over again.Submitted by layanalotaibi7 on
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