The diagram shows the life of a special type of tuna fish.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of one significant type of
tuna
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fish
.
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Overall
, the life cycle of Linking Words
tuna
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fish
consists of four main stages: egg, larva, juvenile, Use synonyms
adult
. Correct word choice
and adult
Planktons
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Plankton
tuna
swim by being transported by currents, Use synonyms
whereas
nektons swim freely.
The life cycle of Linking Words
tuna
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fish
begins when Use synonyms
tuna
eggs are hatched, where they measure 1 Use synonyms
micrometer
. Afterwards, they live as larvae inside the egg sac Change the spelling
micrometre
while
reaching 4 Linking Words
micrometer
and feeding on other organisms. Change to a plural noun
micrometers
Also
, Larvae cannot swim freely, so they are transported by currents. Larvae turn into juveniles where they measure twelve Linking Words
micrometer
and start eating voraciously.
After the Change to a plural noun
micrometers
fish
start shoaling, they are considered Use synonyms
adult
. Adult Fix the agreement mistake
adults
tuna
migrates Use synonyms
while
swimming freely In shoals. By external fertilisation, eggs are released from male and female mature tunas, and the entire journey is repeated all over again.Linking Words
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