The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the
process
of sugar
manufacture from sugar
cane
plants.
It is clear that
there are 7 stages in the production of sugar
. The process
begins with planting sugar
cane
and ends with dry and cool processing before being distributed to other industries.
Looking at sugar
production in detail, sugar
cane
is ready to be harvested after it is 12 to 18 months old. There are two methods of harvesting, using harvester machines or slashing manually by farmers. Following that, the sugar
cane
stalks are crushed to extract the juice. Then
, the extract needs to be filtered to produce pure essence through a limestone filter.
At the fifth stage in the process
, the juice extract is heated in a big tube, and the resulting evaporate is syrup. Next,
the syrup is separated through a centrifugation process
to get sugar
crystals. Finally
, these crystals are dried and cooled before sugar
can be consumed.Submitted by helainhye2 on
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