A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advise In your letter: • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. •describe some possible disadvantages. •say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Sir or Madam

Hello

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my friend.How are you I think you are so good because I

hear

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heard

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your

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about your

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plan

this

summer from your sister. You will go to the camping.I guess

this

correct decision

due to

this

year is very

hardly

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and

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any

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no

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problem. You should go to camping

for

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apply

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chill out. I guess you

worth

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are worth

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it like

this

camping holiday I guess you worth it. Considering, you always hard work on your job.

In

addition

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you have

focus

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on your job.

However

, lots of

capming

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camping

calming

have our country

isn't

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isn't it

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? Exactly, I think the

camp

you are going to is very bad. Because

,

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one year I went to

this

camping

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camp

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and I am very

regret

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and

And

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I was never going to

this

camp

. As long as

,

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this

camp

have

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lot

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a lot

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of rat

insect

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.

Then

this

cause made you feel uncomfortable and

annoying

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annoyed

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. I trying as possible go to my house. Because I didn't

bearing

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on

camp

's atmosphere. I am very

wanted

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go to

the

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camping with you But you don't go

the

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camp

I want. So maybe next year

i

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I

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will go to the

camp

with you,if you want it. In my

opinion

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opinion,

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you have

change

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your decision for

this

camp

. And you have more opportunities for any camps. But it is your opinion

not

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, not

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mine, if you

wanted

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it. No problems ! Yours faithfully Jacob