The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999."

The line graph demonstrates tourists’ flow in and out

the

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United Kingdom from 1979 to 1999,

while

the bar chart illustrates the rate of popularity of

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destinations among

UK

residents

in 1999. Units of measurement are in

millions

of

people

.

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, the number of tourists from the

UK

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visited

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the

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other countries dramatically went up

in

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almost five times,

meanwhile

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the flow of foreign visitors

in

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the United Kingdom

was

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doubled. As can be seen, France was visited by

UK

residents

more often than any other country from

this

research, when Turkey was the least preferable destination.

According to

the line chart, the number of visits to and from the

UK

represented

the

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upward trend: visits abroad by

UK

residents

uplifted from more than 10

millions

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in 1979 to more than 50

millions

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in 1999,

whereas

visits to the

UK

by overseas

residents

went up from 10

millions

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in 1979 to almost 30

millions

of

people

in 1999. As is presented in the bar chart, France was the most popular country for

UK

citizens in 1999, in excess of 10

millions

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of

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people

visited

this

place, at the same time, Turkey attracted only around 3 million

of

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tourists. Spain took the second place in preference, a little bit less than 10

millions

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spent their vacation there. About 4

millions

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of

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people

chose the United States of America as their

trip’s

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destination,

while

Greece was visited by less than 4

millions

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of

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UK

residents

.