The diagram below shows how elctricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how elctricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the procedure of producing electricity by one
renwable
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renewable
source of energy. It is evident that operations held
at
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daytime
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the daytime
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and during
night
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the night
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are different. The first step during the day is when
water
from a river fills the High-level
reservoir
.
Following
this
step
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the
water
flows to the Power station to generate electricity, where it operates a
generator
and either
then
lifts up to the Power lines and the National grid or to
fulfill
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the Low-level
reservoir
.
In contrast
, at night the High-level
reservoir
is closed by means of the Dam and the
water
is being pumped by the
Generator
. After the
water
leaves the Low-level
reservoir
, it flows in pipes
though
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the
generator
and
finally
to the bigger
reservoir
.
Overall
, a Hydroelectric power station produces energy and electricity
via
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pumping
water
from the river by the
Generator
. The process varies depending on the time of the day.
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