The bar chart below shows the number of students who enrolled in three courses a private institute in India from 2000 to 2015.
The bar graph illustrates the figures of pupils who registered in three different courses at non-government
organization
in India between 2000 and 2015.
Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
Overall
, it can clearly see
that there Wrong verb form
be seen
were
a Correct subject-verb agreement
was
dramatical fluctuate
in nursing, Replace the word
dramatic fluctuation
pharmacy
and physiotherapy
in the
most of the period given.
Comparing Correct article usage
apply
between
Change preposition
apply
pharmacy
and physiotherapy
, the number of students
who enrolled in physiotherapy
was higher than pharmacy
in 2010, but after five years Change preposition
in pharmacy
pharmacy
became more than physiotherapy
. Moreover
, as a
regards Correct article usage
apply
to
nursing, it Change preposition
apply
was reach
its peak at nearly 95% in 2015, Change the verb form
reached
whereas
in 2005 it was at the
lowest point at 20%.
There was a sharp descended in the percentage of Change the word
its
students
who register
in nursing from approximately 55% to 20% in the first five years. Wrong verb form
registered
In addition
, the number of students
who register
in Wrong verb form
registered
pharmacy
was
declined Unnecessary verb
apply
upto
2000 (70%) to 2005 (about 41%) . If we compare Correct your spelling
up to
between
Change preposition
apply
physiotherapy
and nursing, in 2005, the majority of students
enrolled was physiotherapy
at about 81%, while
nursing was a
second common one at around 20%Correct article usage
the
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pharmacy, physiotherapy, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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