The charts below show the percentage of Irish students at one university who spoke an additional language to English from 2000 to 2010.
THE PIE CHARTS ILLUSTRATE THE PROPORTION OF STUDENTS IN
IRLAND
AT ONE UNIVERSITY WHO KNOW TO SPEAK AN ADDITIONAL Correct your spelling
IRELAND
LANGUAGE
APART FROM ENGLISH IN THE YEARS
2000 AND 2010.
OVERALL
, IN BOTH YEARS
, SPEAKING SPANISH WAS PREFFERRED
BY MORE STUDENTS COMPARED WITH OTHERS. Correct your spelling
PREFERRED
HOWEVER
, THE PERCENTAGE OF NO OTHER LANGUAGE
EXHIBITED THE BIGGEST DECLINE DURING THE YEARS
.
ALTHOUGH
SPANISH DID NOT ACCOUNT FOR THE LARGE CHANGES FROM 2000 TO 2010, IT OCCUPIED THE TOPMOST PLACE WITH 30% AND 35% ACCORDING TO
THE YEARS
. THE SECOND HIGHEST PLACE WAS CAPTURED BY ANOTHER LANGUAGE
WHICH ACCOUNTED FOR 15% TO 20% OVER THE COURSE OF 10 YEARS
. BY CONTRAST
, NO OTHER LANGUAGE
EXPERIENCED AN ENORMOUS DROP IN THE PERCENTAGES WHICH DIVED FROM 20% TO 10% BETWEEN 2000 AND 2010.
REGARDING THE REST OF THE LANGUAGE
, STUDENTS WHO ONLY SPOKE FRENCH MADE UP 15% IN 2000 AND DECREASED TO 10% DURING THE 10 YEARS
. CELTIC WAS THE ONLY LANGUAGE
THAT STAY CONSTANT WITH 10% OVER THE 10 YEARS
. NEVERTHELESS
, TWO OTHER LANGUAGES ACCOUNTED FOR THE LAST
WITH 10% IN 2000, THEY WERE CONSIDERED FOR THE THIRD SUPREME IN 2010.Submitted by asgerlituran35 on
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