The bar charts below describe the weekly hours worked by people in four Scandinavian countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below describe the weekly hours worked by people in four Scandinavian countries in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graphs
shows
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the number of working
hours
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that
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is
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spent by people in four different countries every week in 2002. In general, most people in Denmark, Sweden, and the UK spent more than 36
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up
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to 40
hours
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while
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the majority of France workers spent 31 to 35
hours
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.
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with, 70% of Denmark people
spent
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36 to 40
hours
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, followed by about 20% of them
spent
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spend
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31 to 35
hours
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in
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every week to work. 80% of workers in Sweden had up to 40 weekly
hours
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while
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nearly
of
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40% of them spent at least 31
hours
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and ended up in 35
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. In the UK,
a
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half of
British
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the British
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spent 36 to 40
hours
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in seven days to earn money. Meanwhile, 50% of citizens in France put their time to work for 31 to 35
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, but
approixmately
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approximately
35% of them did it for more than 36
until
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to
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40
hours
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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