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The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000.

The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000.
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The pie
chart
 provides data on
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usage
usages
 of
water
 in the world, and the bar
chart
 indicates
water
 used in four different countries (China, India, New Zealand and Canada) in the year 2000.
overall
, it can be seen that the highest percentage of
water
 was used for industrial purposes throughout the world,
while
 the proportion of
water
 used in all countries was equal. Looking at the pie
chart
 data sets in more detail, it is evident that the percentage of
water
 used for industry was higher than
other
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 purposes, at 70%.
Whereas
 22% of
water
 went
on
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 domestic sectors, and Agriculture was the sector which consumed 8% of
water
 over the 1-year period. Turning to the bar
chart
 data sets in more detail,
it is clear that
 the percentage of
water
 used by people in all countries was the same proportion in 2000, which starts
with
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 0% and ends
with
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 100% in agriculture,domestic and industry.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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