The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
The given bar chart illustrates the survey's outcomes regarding consumers'
coffee
and tea purchasing and drinking habits in Australia in the
last
4 weeks.
Overall
,
it is clear that
most people in Australia prefer to purchase
coffee
or tea from a cafe to buy instant
coffee
.
In contrast
, the number of people who bought fresh
coffee
was consistently the lowest in all cities. The most interesting feature that emerges from the chart is that the
proportion
of drinking in a cafe was generally the greatest, mainly in Melbourne, Sydney, and Hobart. It varies between 65% and 60%. Meanwhile, in the other two cities, Brisbane and Adelaide, it accounted for half of the population. Regarding the habit of consuming instant
coffee
, the
proportion
was 15% lower than in cafes in Sydney and Melbourne. In Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart, the
proportion
stood at around 50% to 55%.
On the other hand
, as the lowest
proportion
, fresh
coffee
ranged from 35% to 43%, with Sydney as the highest.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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