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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
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The given bar chart illustrates the survey's outcomes regarding consumers'
coffee
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 and tea purchasing and drinking habits in Australia in the
last
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 4 weeks.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 most people in Australia prefer to purchase
coffee
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 or tea from a cafe to buy instant
coffee
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.
In contrast
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, the number of people who bought fresh
coffee
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 was consistently the lowest in all cities. The most interesting feature that emerges from the chart is that the
proportion
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 of drinking in a cafe was generally the greatest, mainly in Melbourne, Sydney, and Hobart. It varies between 65% and 60%. Meanwhile, in the other two cities, Brisbane and Adelaide, it accounted for half of the population. Regarding the habit of consuming instant
coffee
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, the
proportion
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 was 15% lower than in cafes in Sydney and Melbourne. In Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart, the
proportion
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 stood at around 50% to 55%.
On the other hand
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, as the lowest
proportion
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, fresh
coffee
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 ranged from 35% to 43%, with Sydney as the highest.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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