Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that news ought not to share

the

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personal information

of

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about

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politicians

'

lifes

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lives

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. I totally agree with

this

statement because I believe

politicians

also

have the same

rights

as other celebrities

have

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and in order

them

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for them

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to perform their jobs as professionals, their image should be protected in citizens' perception.

Right

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to keep

one

's private

life

to oneself is

one

of the most easy-to-break

right

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rights

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of fundamental human

rights

and

media

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the media

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usually do not think of

this

type of

wrong doing

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wrongdoing

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when they publish something that shows the details of some famous person's

life

, especially

politicians

'.

This

is because elements of the

media

usually try to reach their maximum profit, as many

people

, and they usually ignore their work ethics

while

they try to do

this

, and

this

results a confusion between their work ethics and their way of earning money.

For instance

, many magazine newspapers use their headline or

fornt

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front

pages to publish details of the celebrities, and

this

is the same as

ragular

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regular

ones using these places to give information about celebrities of the political

life

, and they both end up breaking the

right

to have

private

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life

.

However

, some of the famous

people

of

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in

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the

media

are able to say that

this

right

of

them

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theirs

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has been broken by the

media

,

politicians

do not usually have the luxury to say

this

because there is a common misbelief that

politicans

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politicians

represent the will of citizens and

therefore

it is citizens'

right

to have complete

knowladge

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knowledge

of their

lifes

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lives

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. I strongly disagree with

this

point of view because

politicians

are

also

human and they have the

fundamental

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same fundamental

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rights

as others

have

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and

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this

situation should not be argued as it is

one

of the fundamental

rights

.

Politicians

would lose their chance to perform their

job

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jobs

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as professionals

,

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if their image

on

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in

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the

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society is regulated by

media

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the media

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.

This

is because

people

tend to see the shocking details of someone's private

life

as their whole identity

,

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and confuse their private

life

with their performance as

politicians

.

For example

, Burk Tativa, who is the Prime Minister of Economic Relations in Switzerland, considered the best economist in various terms,

forced

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to quit his career as a politician just because he lost a large amount of his investment, as an individual, in some enterprice. I think that

one

's

act

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actions

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in their

life

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are

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is totally consider

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one

's private

life

and

does

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do

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not give any information about

one

's career as

politician

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a politician

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.

To conclude

, what political identities do in their

lifes

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lives

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should not be subject to newspapers because of the human

rights

they have as individuals and the effects of the illusion of

those kind

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that kind

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of news on

people

.