The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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table displays how unemployed people from the UK spent their time in the past year. There are four groups of unemployed people, morning
men
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, morning women,
afternoon
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men
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, and
afternoon
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women. The numbers are shown as percentages.
Firstly
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, the
activity
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that most
men
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unemployed in the morning take part in is job hunting, with 22% of the group doing
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activity
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. For
afternoon
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men
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, the most popular thing to do is to watch TV, with 14%. In terms of females without a job, up to 49% of them spend their morning doing housework. It is the most common
activity
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for
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group of people. Regarding
afternoon
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women, housework is
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the most popular, with 21% spending their time
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way. Another notable feature from
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table is that for almost every
activity
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, there are more females doing it than
men
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.
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, in the
last
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year, jobless males invested their time in searching for employment and watching the television the most,
whereas
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jobless females mostly did housework.
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